The two of these are plans for storyboards for our film we have done it like this so you can see what is happening in both situations at the same time, they go on simultaneously
· 1) It would start off with (number 5) which is actually the end so we would start it off with a non-linear plot, this is a flash back but the audience wouldn't know this at this point. So the mise-en-scene would be in school hallway where he's stood at a door blocking the exit she's facing the other way he walks up to her it’s an over the shoulder shot from her front, so you can see her expressions but can also see a blurred figure walking towards he, then it switches from that to an over the shoulder of the him but you don't see his face all you see is a bit of his shoulder a gun, then a gun going off. (music playing)
· 2) It would start off with a swipe up transition an establishing shot of him in bed so you get to see where he is , the mise-en-scene of this scene is a bedroom, masculine bedroom dark cause it's night with phone next to him, no sound just silence. (number 1 in bed) (music fades)
· 3) Then it would go to (number 1 in the hallway) where he’s walking after her as she's running there’d be no dialogue except him saying 'stop'. When he screams stop it, it blurs and flashes and then it would go back to him in this bed (music stops) it would then start craning up to the ceiling and the phone rings and wakes up to the phone ringing, it would crane down fast to the phone then zoom in on the phone, it would ring a few times then you hear "Hello Steven, Steven, It's urgent are you awake, its Caroline, I know it's late but we need you, call me back when you get this". (number 2)
· 4) Then to (number 3 in his bedroom) and this is where he will be just answering the phone and then a flash and it flashes back to the flashback (number 3) where she's walking and the lights are off and the camera angle is an over the shoulder shot of her walking, slowly to show that she is scared. (music stops) Then it flashes and all you can hear is her saying 'Hello Steven, you there, Steven?’ then it then it goes back to (number 4) where he’s answered the phone and he’s looking in to space and you hear once again ‘Steven?’ and a close up of him snapping out of it and him going ‘yeah I’m here, what do you want’ she replies saying ‘we need you, we need your help, I know you’re retired and after the last time, you swore you were done, but this is important’ he replies with ‘to who you, the agency, yes you are right I told you I’m done’.
· 5) Then it flashes back to (number four in the hallway) where he's stood there blocking the door way, she's trapped, at this point all you see is her back/shoulder and him standing in the way of the door. (music playing)
· 6) Then to (number 5 in the hallway) the man pulls out his gun she turns around, camera shot goes to a shot an over the shoulder shot of him but you don't see his face all you see is a bit of his shoulder a gun, then a gun going off, then you see her drop to the floor him turn around and then he turns around and takes of his mask and this is where the audience see's that it's Steven who is the killer.(music playing)
· 7) Then it flashes back to (number 5 in his bedroom) with him sat there and you hear through the phone 'Steven?' then you here a gunshot go off which is in his head, he kind of just 'comes back in the room' and then he hangs up in shock and says 'I can’t go back' (music playing) then it comes up with a black screen and the title of the film will come with something around the lines of these, as we haven't decided are title yet
I will be doing the camera work for this film wh Emilyit and Jordan as the actors.
The work above was created by Jordan, and is took off of his blog site, as he is a member of my group
